Here are my final two mounted square designs for playful and periodic. My group thought that together you could tell the difference between playful and periodic but maybe not if they were separated. They also thought that my periodic design had a similarity and playful had closure. The group said that both pieces had good meaning. I need to fix the rounded corners and a few of the edges to make it better. Overall the group gave me a good critique and I think the pieces turned out well.
can you be more specific than "a good critique" for future write ups. it would help me understand the feedback you got.
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